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LENNY'S VINTAGE

A 76-year-old vintage BMW motorcycle dealer, estranged brothers, and a woman who won't let him hide. 91 pages. Dialogue rated 9/10. 99th percentile. First ten pages free.

Lenny Rosen runs a vintage BMW motorcycle shop in Pittsburgh. He's 76. He's good with machines and terrible with people — not because he doesn't care, but because caring is the thing he's been avoiding for decades.

When his estranged brother shows up unannounced and a woman named Claire refuses to let him deflect, Lenny is forced to confront everything he buried under engine grease and routine. The screenplay is about what happens when a man who fixes everything can't fix the thing that matters.

Eleven years in the writing. Professional script coverage scored the dialogue 9 out of 10 — 99th percentile. Pittsburgh isn't just the setting; it's a character.

DIALOGUE: 9/10

99th percentile. "Authentic, textured, and distinct to each character. Lenny's voice carries the weight of a life lived in deflection."

CHARACTER

A protagonist who earns empathy not through likability but through the slow reveal of what he's lost and what he refuses to grieve.

SETTING

Pittsburgh as working-class texture — the shop, the bridges, the neighborhoods where people stay too long and leave too late.

FIRST 10 PAGES FREE

Read the opening. If Lenny's voice doesn't hook you, nothing else will.

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